Serious [Review] Art of The Week

[MaXenzie]

Awesome stuff! I didn't know there was a discord, got a link?

https://discord.gg/sfm

if you thought people in neb were good at SFM, these people make shit that looks like it's straight-up real life

 

[Piggo]

Theres many
for the love of christ

do NOT visit the r/sfm discord

 

[MaXenzie]

Theres many
for the love of christ

do NOT visit the r/sfm discord

you mean the official one that's partnered with discord?

 

[Piggo]

you mean the official one that's partnered with discord?

Yes indeed
OSFM is by far superior, far better criticism to be had there
Lead by Zacharia Scott too

 

[MaXenzie]

Yes indeed
OSFM is by far superior, far better criticism to be had there
Lead by Zacharia Scott too

DM me it

 

[Dicknose]

Yes indeed
OSFM is by far superior, far better criticism to be had there
Lead by Zacharia Scott too

DM me please

 

[Stelios]

Spoiler

no one is reacting cause it's right at the moment the guy gets shot btw

 

[Piggo]

DM me please

https://steamcommunity.com/groups/OpenSourceFilmmaker

 

[Deleted member 5162]

I have nothing to submit, other than this kino shot​

 

[Dicknose]

 

[Danny]

Here we go again, to get a look at last weeks entries and their criticisms CLICK HERE.
My week was eh, hope yours was ok.
This next song is from Joe Keery, AKA Steve Harrington from Stranger Things.

Supposing these are the pictures I couldn't get a real view on last week? I'm happy you decided to repost though because they really are good! And the lighting in each one is pretty swell as well. Personally woulda liked some background props or something just for that cherry on top kinda thing but I know from experience it can be a bit iffy to decorate i17. Only other gripe is that everything in the pictures seems to have an ambient glow besides the eyes on the masks which are actually glowing. All about the details my guy :^). Stay fresshhh cus I can't give you honours and wins all the time.

Hey this is pretty! I like the slightly dull UK country colours in the background as well. Kinda makes it look a lot more like a painting than anything else. A very creative painting at that! But the lighting like super confusing on the castle! It's as if it's casting a shadow on itself while being in a shadow anyways at some points. Idk if it's to gloss over anything but that's my only tiff with it. Great thing though I do love it.

Best lighting in the game babyyyy, looks straight out of the game itself and I always thought Overwatch had a kinda distinct soft shadow technique in their cinematics and this is really convincing! I prefer scenebuilds but a good profile shot of a character is pretty cool from time to time with the right lighting. My ONLY issue is, her eyes look kinda red. Great work Maxi :^).

I really like a good first person scene and I like the lack of hud as well because usually most CP first person things have a tonne of UI on them or at least I remember most like that. And the lighting is really crisp and clean like the old F.E.A.R games which is coolio. Only thing lacking is actually light sources in the image. And the blood spray isn't too exaggerated either so all in all just a nice screenshot really.

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You are right it really is kino, I wasn't even aware there was areas like this on the server at the moment which shows how much I play lol. Woulda been nice to get a tighter angle on the the canal than the 90 FOV for cinematography sake but y'know it's really nice for a screenshot. Looks kinda nashville.

Boy am I a sucker for a good bit of film grain, really liking the lighting work here because you can almost see the distance between the man and the wall in the picture. Those curtain models are super cool as well but the interior design wannabe inside me disagrees with white curtains with those wallpapers... The inclusion of closed captions/subtitles as well actually adds something to it as well and the choice of colour for the text is super good as well. Just a great simple scene build here folks. Nice nice nice.

MY WINNING VOTE: @Dicknose

Honourable Votes for "epic media dev lights" and "I like the original F.E.A.R game":
@MaXenzie and @Neythi

Spoiler: their pictures

As usual hope my words were useful.
I'll be around if you need me.
See u next week homies
I took this picture with a Canon AE-1 on Kodak Gold film.​

 

[Stelios]

 

[247-0006-0001 'Jimbo']

@Danny
Force someone to hire me already, Jeez. I'm running low on commission money to fund my alcoholism.

An just for fun, an extra unfinished project:

Don't I spoil you lot? Cheeky bastards.

 

[Deleted member 5162]

 

[Inaudible™]

This shit aint good but I tried somethin different and greenscreen shit fucked up so I had to crop a whole bit out so rip

 

[Cookie_]

It's been almost half a year since I've done anything. Please be kind or else...

*Beep boop beep*

 

[Dudu Fadende]

I'm so used to being in this I keep looking for my submissions every time I check this thread.
Good lookin shit you guys are pumping out.

 

[Dicknose]

 

[MaXenzie]

lighting rundown?

 

[Dicknose]

lighting rundown?

I basically did your lighting tutorial, added two extra lights behind both anakin and obi-wan. Added blue light in front of them