Completed [Competition] Art of The Week

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First submission after 2 months of inactivity

woah sick edgy vaporwaves bro!!!!!!!!!!
 
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>try to roast someone for not giving constructive criticism
>try to shit on someones artwork instead of giving actual feedback
I wasn't trying to shit on his artwork what the fuck?
 

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mfw someone asks me for auths for throwing knives

@Anleas, it's getting better, I must admit that. However, it's still blurry as fuck, and the colours are bit blank, I'd rise the contrast and saturation there. Another things, is that while there is some concept, it lacks of a dramatic camera angle and maybe some more depth to it. I'd place the camera really close to the prisoner's face, both to show his emotions as he'd helplessly stare down, and to show what's far away from him, a crowd of people walking by, minding their own business, while only some stop to watch and feel sorry for the man. Camera angle should be really creative, as the perspective from which the viewer is looking, usually makes all the difference. Get some emotions in and edit it all up so it looks sharp as an axe, then I'll get you up to the hall of fame mang

@external, I actually miss Finaly to be frank, listening to his videos helps me to remember why I shouldn't though

@RetroPirate1, who is Sven
On a serious note, another
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to your collection. One day I'll make a Sven meme for you myself

@The Soviet Union, don't get it tbh. I don't even know what the thing in the middle is supposed to be. Shield, face, split sink with milk? Candles look nice though, but because I see no concept behind it, I give six out of ten

@Lyon, a pretty sick poster, in both good and bad way. I see some neat lighting and editing up front, but in the background all the fire looks really low res. Another thing is posing, which seems bit unnatural, as I dubt that someone would rotate his head like that to aim, but forget to rise his arm up in the air. What really stands out here, is a terrible camera angle if you mind me. A perfect camera work here, would be a look from a frog perspective, as if the viewer would be lying injured on the ground, while the main guy there is aiming the gun at him. It's really close to a perfection, to something totally worthy a wallpaper. It's just the camera angle that puts me off. Still, worth a
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with no dubt

@Hoblit, it's a pretty basic poster, really. A single fire particle in background, a basic animation OTA and some of that 'oil-painting' filter. Don't really know what could be added to it, besides some more interesting camera angle like I said above, and maybe some of that good old bright red eye editing

@Maccas, I adore your avatar, good nostalgia from it. The photo itself isn't exactly interesting, besides those magnificent clouds over there. If you cut off the part with sun and sky, it looks pretty much like some puffy snow, which I love. More like a
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worthy photo to me than a winner, but nice one to see

@afran, I'd lower the size of it a bit, so it'd look more like high res poster, but it's p good,
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. Lay down a bit, you've won recently fam :ok:

@lil fandango, as mentioned in few others above, there isn't really any concept behind it, except for just exploring. Nice light volumetrics tho, but I'd fiddle with render settings and set the ambient occlusion to max, plus maybe do the same in camera settings, so the 'little black dots' won't be seen. Still, a p cool poster, some kind of event announcement image maybe?


Bit of a media dev win, but idc

Big win - @spectry

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Small win - @Erkor aka I-steal-the-show-every-time,
@Elan (troubles with shadows and plastic frogs&shrooms threw me away)
and @Clark, by doing some edgy youtuber's intro

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