OK I just finished watching a real fucking scary movie and seeing that fucking asian man with his 90 degree snapped head with that expression is really messing with my head.
Not to shit on your art, it's good bar the asian guy's head going beyond a normal persons neck would allow, but it's just really messing with my post-horror brain.
Actual critique: Having that CP shadow on the left is cool, but the CP using his helmet radio in the same spot as the shadow makes it really hard to see the arm cause it just looks like part of the shadow. If you turn him more towards the civvies and give the shadow its own space so to speak, it'd really give the image some good dimensions. Also, for art letterboxing really makes an image pop as it directs the viewers eyes more to a specific area, like so;
It's a small change but it really neatens the image so it focuses on the scene, y'know?