Completed [Competition] Art of The Week

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@Anleas, complete reincarnation of my vision in previous comment, nice job, lol
Not much to speak of, since you pretty much copied what I said, but I'll go over the colours, since that's the thing that I was bitching about every time, and it's slowly improving. The juicyness of colours is fine, but I'd put the contrast even more up, to add that sharpness to it, since it still feels pretty blurry. Scene itself though is nicely filled up, except for the behind of the prisoner, there's literally noone there. Everything else though is decent, especially the lightwork. Shame that it's just built on my idea, instead of just using the advices to create something new. Still, best one so far, keep it up fam, you're getting really close now,
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@dee pixel, good to see you finally getting to the good side of this community Dee, instead of filthy RP. I like the dark vibe you got in the poster of yours, good choice of coloristics and fog. Concept is pretty decent, haven't seen one like that for a while, but what's bugging me, is the boring camera angle. You could place it above the attacker's shoulder, and tilt it a bit right or left side, to add the tensity. Of course you could also go a bit higher with the resolution, but whatever, it's still pretty good either way. Would be something worth a loading screen if only not the camera angle. Try to look up how they do it in the movies. Still,
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@Pale Rider, no.1 it's a really empty scene, and has a boring camera, just as above. I'd aim here for the same camera angle as you have now, just moving it somewhere close-up to the cop, or whoever your main character is, something like what you did here. Add more stuff to it, and maybe more movement, like civies being beaten down in the background, you know, stuff that's somehow interacting with rest of the world, and is moving. Maybe some lighting from the side of camera as well, as the characters seem to be pretty dark there, even if two lights are behind them. Idk, waiting for more
no.2 it'd be okay, if only the editing wouldn't make it all so bad looking, you literally can't see any detail there, and it looks like you'd resize some tiny picture. Concept of it is pretty generic as well, though I like lighting on this one. It's just that the scene is really empty and could use some citizens hanging around + the reporter himself.

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Really simple pic with just an added filter
It propably has some deep meaning to it, but wouldn't consider it something worthy a win, unless you treat some random girl on facebook posting this pic with some deep ass quote as a win. That could sure as hell happen anytime if you'd post it somewhere where they look in. It's pretty nice tho,
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@Erkor you cock, where do you get your models from
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@Cookie_-Chan, I don't mind this type of posters, though they're too simple for my liking. Making some 3D poster in this coloristic though, that could look nice. Pretty good tho, maybe you deserve a medal afterall

@georgeebizzle, let kids play by themself, ok

@Danny, love fireworks, and love the ones you got there. Maybe some editing would add more spice to it, but it's pretty much a cool photo I wouldn't mind putting on my social media profile if I were you. Cool,
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@MaXenzie, amazing camera angle and editing, that one is why you're one of the best. Earns you a honorary, would be a total win if only you weren't media dev + frequent winner.
I'll need this kind of artwork later on, don't burn out too soon fam

@afran, pretty much the only problems I have here are low res walls and low quality ambient occlusion, but gotta love the posing there, feels truly alive.
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@Broly, it wouldn't be that bad if the 'top meme quotes' were removed and that drum that goes in every second wouldn't be this loud. Other than that, it was actually pretty decent, looking forward to next ones fam
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@Dunjam, actually thanks for finding that one :ok:

@Maccas, @Chicken Rickler, @ecchikawaii, @RetroPirate1, @bjfgpkqkdmtnspwndsjt
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Here are the winners then
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@Derpy, and his first proper win

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@georgeebizzle, @MaXenzie and their honorary, because I fear the riot
that could happen if I'd let media devs win constantly

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@Anleas, complete reincarnation of my vision in previous comment, nice job, lol
Not much to speak of, since you pretty much copied what I said, but I'll go over the colours, since that's the thing that I was bitching about every time, and it's slowly improving. The juicyness of colours is fine, but I'd put the contrast even more up, to add that sharpness to it, since it still feels pretty blurry. Scene itself though is nicely filled up, except for the behind of the prisoner, there's literally noone there. Everything else though is decent, especially the lightwork. Shame that it's just built on my idea, instead of just using the advices to create something new. Still, best one so far, keep it up fam, you're getting really close now,
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@dee pixel, good to see you finally getting to the good side of this community Dee, instead of filthy RP. I like the dark vibe you got in the poster of yours, good choice of coloristics and fog. Concept is pretty decent, haven't seen one like that for a while, but what's bugging me, is the boring camera angle. You could place it above the attacker's shoulder, and tilt it a bit right or left side, to add the tensity. Of course you could also go a bit higher with the resolution, but whatever, it's still pretty good either way. Would be something worth a loading screen if only not the camera angle. Try to look up how they do it in the movies. Still,
thumbup1.gif


@Pale Rider, no.1 it's a really empty scene, and has a boring camera, just as above. I'd aim here for the same camera angle as you have now, just moving it somewhere close-up to the cop, or whoever your main character is, something like what you did here. Add more stuff to it, and maybe more movement, like civies being beaten down in the background, you know, stuff that's somehow interacting with rest of the world, and is moving. Maybe some lighting from the side of camera as well, as the characters seem to be pretty dark there, even if two lights are behind them. Idk, waiting for more
no.2 it'd be okay, if only the editing wouldn't make it all so bad looking, you literally can't see any detail there, and it looks like you'd resize some tiny picture. Concept of it is pretty generic as well, though I like lighting on this one. It's just that the scene is really empty and could use some citizens hanging around + the reporter himself.

@Fred

It propably has some deep meaning to it, but wouldn't consider it something worthy a win, unless you treat some random girl on facebook posting this pic with some deep ass quote as a win. That could sure as hell happen anytime if you'd post it somewhere where they look in. It's pretty nice tho,
thumbup1.gif


@Erkor you cock, where do you get your models from
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@Cookie_-Chan, I don't mind this type of posters, though they're too simple for my liking. Making some 3D poster in this coloristic though, that could look nice. Pretty good tho, maybe you deserve a medal afterall

@georgeebizzle, let kids play by themself, ok

@Danny, love fireworks, and love the ones you got there. Maybe some editing would add more spice to it, but it's pretty much a cool photo I wouldn't mind putting on my social media profile if I were you. Cool,
thumbup1.gif


@MaXenzie, amazing camera angle and editing, that one is why you're one of the best. Earns you a honorary, would be a total win if only you weren't media dev + frequent winner.
I'll need this kind of artwork later on, don't burn out too soon fam

@afran, pretty much the only problems I have here are low res walls and low quality ambient occlusion, but gotta love the posing there, feels truly alive.
thumbup1.gif


@Broly, it wouldn't be that bad if the 'top meme quotes' were removed and that drum that goes in every second wouldn't be this loud. Other than that, it was actually pretty decent, looking forward to next ones fam
thumbup1.gif


@Dunjam, actually thanks for finding that one :ok:

@Maccas, @Chicken Rickler, @ecchikawaii, @RetroPirate1, @bjfgpkqkdmtnspwndsjt
:me:
:me:
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Here are the winners then
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@Derpy, and his first proper win

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@georgeebizzle, @MaXenzie and their honorary, because I fear the riot
that could happen if I'd let media devs win constantly

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And back into the darkness I go for another hiatus.
 

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@Anleas, complete reincarnation of my vision in previous comment, nice job, lol
Not much to speak of, since you pretty much copied what I said, but I'll go over the colours, since that's the thing that I was bitching about every time, and it's slowly improving. The juicyness of colours is fine, but I'd put the contrast even more up, to add that sharpness to it, since it still feels pretty blurry. Scene itself though is nicely filled up, except for the behind of the prisoner, there's literally noone there. Everything else though is decent, especially the lightwork. Shame that it's just built on my idea, instead of just using the advices to create something new. Still, best one so far, keep it up fam, you're getting really close now,
thumbup1.gif


@dee pixel, good to see you finally getting to the good side of this community Dee, instead of filthy RP. I like the dark vibe you got in the poster of yours, good choice of coloristics and fog. Concept is pretty decent, haven't seen one like that for a while, but what's bugging me, is the boring camera angle. You could place it above the attacker's shoulder, and tilt it a bit right or left side, to add the tensity. Of course you could also go a bit higher with the resolution, but whatever, it's still pretty good either way. Would be something worth a loading screen if only not the camera angle. Try to look up how they do it in the movies. Still,
thumbup1.gif


@Pale Rider, no.1 it's a really empty scene, and has a boring camera, just as above. I'd aim here for the same camera angle as you have now, just moving it somewhere close-up to the cop, or whoever your main character is, something like what you did here. Add more stuff to it, and maybe more movement, like civies being beaten down in the background, you know, stuff that's somehow interacting with rest of the world, and is moving. Maybe some lighting from the side of camera as well, as the characters seem to be pretty dark there, even if two lights are behind them. Idk, waiting for more
no.2 it'd be okay, if only the editing wouldn't make it all so bad looking, you literally can't see any detail there, and it looks like you'd resize some tiny picture. Concept of it is pretty generic as well, though I like lighting on this one. It's just that the scene is really empty and could use some citizens hanging around + the reporter himself.

@Fred

It propably has some deep meaning to it, but wouldn't consider it something worthy a win, unless you treat some random girl on facebook posting this pic with some deep ass quote as a win. That could sure as hell happen anytime if you'd post it somewhere where they look in. It's pretty nice tho,
thumbup1.gif


@Erkor you cock, where do you get your models from
thumbup1.gif
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@Cookie_-Chan, I don't mind this type of posters, though they're too simple for my liking. Making some 3D poster in this coloristic though, that could look nice. Pretty good tho, maybe you deserve a medal afterall

@georgeebizzle, let kids play by themself, ok

@Danny, love fireworks, and love the ones you got there. Maybe some editing would add more spice to it, but it's pretty much a cool photo I wouldn't mind putting on my social media profile if I were you. Cool,
thumbup1.gif


@MaXenzie, amazing camera angle and editing, that one is why you're one of the best. Earns you a honorary, would be a total win if only you weren't media dev + frequent winner.
I'll need this kind of artwork later on, don't burn out too soon fam

@afran, pretty much the only problems I have here are low res walls and low quality ambient occlusion, but gotta love the posing there, feels truly alive.
thumbup1.gif


@Broly, it wouldn't be that bad if the 'top meme quotes' were removed and that drum that goes in every second wouldn't be this loud. Other than that, it was actually pretty decent, looking forward to next ones fam
thumbup1.gif


@Dunjam, actually thanks for finding that one :ok:

@Maccas, @Chicken Rickler, @ecchikawaii, @RetroPirate1, @bjfgpkqkdmtnspwndsjt
:me:
:me:
bbe8bd57d4b7dc19b785ba8f713d0584.png






mo_19.gif
Here are the winners then
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@Derpy, and his first proper win

0rk8XNZ.jpg


@georgeebizzle, @MaXenzie and their honorary, because I fear the riot
that could happen if I'd let media devs win constantly

ww2_by_fosset-daen54n.jpg


b4cb4a1cbe9ad2ac0daa2518eb0768bb.png
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