Completed [Competition] Art of The Week

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Aleks

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I'll submit this because why not and feedback is nice.
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I'll submit this because why not and feedback is nice.
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irrelevant but
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close enough


anyway for criticism, feels like default sequence anim stopped at a moment, could be better with additional lights from the sides doing some form of rimlighting or fill lighting for poses like these

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there are four lights, one from bottom to head, one on the top left and one from flank right and one top right. this is what it could be like with rimlight and all that stufferoni
 

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irrelevant but

close enough


anyway for criticism, feels like default sequence anim stopped at a moment, could be better with additional lights from the sides doing some form of rimlighting or fill lighting for poses like these

Missed that part, my bad. Anyway thanks for the feedback will take it into consideration especially with the lighting aspect.
 

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I'll submit this because why not and feedback is nice.
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I actually kinda like the post processing and colour correction there. The lighting works pretty well with the angle and hat casting the shadow.
 
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I actually kinda like the post processing and colour correction there. The lighting works pretty well with the angle and hat casting the shadow.
Yeah, gotta agree on that one, it's just the animation that kinda sucks

And where is his cigarette
 

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Yeah, gotta agree on that one, it's just the animation that kinda sucks

And where is his cigarette
Thought it looked more like a finger point seeing as the cigarette can be visibly seen in the mouth. Anyway thanks for the feedback.
 
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