Completed [Competition] Art of The Week

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he has eyes dont worry
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its just that his pupils are really, really small
 

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Looks really good :)

Could be even more good if you for example had some enemies over there on the floor that the sniper guy is going to "infiltrate", so it doesnt have this empty floor and gives more concept, if you get what I mean.
 
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You see those grains?

You need to change your render settings and increase DoF to max to remove the grains.
 

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@MaXenzie, you fuck
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@Elan, slowly getting better in this. I love the editing, it feels like a proper painting. However, the camera placement is just boring, and doesn't really show much happening. Maybe if you would add things like few cops (not really the HL2 ones) walking around the scene, investigating, you know, making pictures and all that stuff, as well as some people walking by outside, being blocked by the famous police tape that you shouldn't cross, then it would look way more interesting. Still, you're getting there fam, and you're literally meters away from the perfect wallpaper. Keep it up fam,
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@Anleas, it's a nice, climatic pose, really. Only problem I have with it, is the emptyness. WHile the closest ground to the male is completly filled, the walls there are pretty fucking empty. I don't know, maybe even a shelf would fix it. Other than that, interesting camera angle, but it's put like it'd want to show something there, behind that TV, and there's nothing there. Not bad, but also not really pleasing. Still, it's getting better with each one you post

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@dee pixel, bit of a meme, but I still like it. If there'd be more stuff present, it would actually look very nice.

@Club Ace, 1 first thing are the pupils. Second is the bullets unnaturally leaking out of the barrel. Last thing is the fact, that there's no real concept whatsoever, besides a good reference. I'd maybe make it more action-like with some proper camera angle, as well as adding some of his puppets, like here. I'd love to say that you're pretty good, but it's not the time yet. I'll be waiting then
@Club Ace, 2 it's pretty damn empty man, and the poor ambient occlusion (small little dots) is triggerring me. Decent posing, but nothing else to it, really, he's infiltrating an empty base. Another thing you forgot, is the fact that he's in RED team, so his edgy goggles should be in red color, rather than blue. Putting a big-ass title into your artwork doesn't really work as well, at least for me, idk. It's like an unfinished raw idea, like you'd start, do it for hal an hour, and say "fuck it".
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And now the decision @Hoovie the Apansenok will hate me for

@Do Jet gets the big win, while Hoovie only the small one

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