Completed [Competition] Art of The Week

[Mennui]

[Made the photoshop edit - not the pose]

Spoiler: Original

 

[MaXenzie]

[Made the photoshop edit - not the pose]

Spoiler: Original

Inspired by WATCH_DOGS?

 

[Erkor]

mmmmmm so good

 

[heaveN]

my new wallpaper, thx

 

[Deleted member 374]

 

[steambored]

scum

Thats a rather large muzzleflash

 

[Danny]

photos never really win or contribute much to this thread but I still do it
for real tho, dee's got this one in the bag chaps.

xxx

 

[SkinVest]

Holy shit, I actually got a smaller win. Thanks :) didn't expect that

 

[dallahan]

[Made the photoshop edit - not the pose]

Spoiler: Original

That's some nice shit dude!

 

[Bandit]

[Made the photoshop edit - not the pose]

Spoiler: Original

 

[MaXenzie]

I started making more SFM poses recently and was like "I should put in another entry."

And then I saw Mennui and Dee Pixel's entry.

 

[Elan]

No point in really uploading at all this week but im looking for feedback.

I tried using AE to give it a nice snow effect but i cannot save it as a gif for i don't know how to keep it at high ish quality.

Cba to upload a longer a video.

 

[Deleted member 374]

No point in really uploading at all this week but im looking for feedback.

I tried using AE to give it a nice snow effect but i cannot save it as a gif for i don't know how to keep it at high ish quality.

Cba to upload a longer a video.

i actually love this wtf

 

[liew]

meh idk, feedback entry I guess.

 

[Danny]

meh idk, feedback entry I guess.

This is pretty nice, can see that's it's reminiscent of the BF1 trailer a little bit

But, when making a scene that's focused on something other than a character, I find that it's always a bit better to put more light in it so you can see everything else, It's quite dark in other places yet the soldier is so bright

Also, negative space when looking straight at some wood with sandbags on it, doesn't really look nice, especially when it takes up most of the picture and then you can't find something to focus on. I'd put something there or change the angle of the camera.
Work with a few angles to play with ukno

Spoiler: tldr

• Add more even lighting (to this or future poses)

• Different camera angle might be beneficial

• More props to the scenebuild

• Fill up the negative space

just an opinion ofcourse nd u asked for feedback ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
xxx

 

[All Adm*ns are Bastards]

photos never really win or contribute much to this thread but I still do it
for real tho, dee's got this one in the bag chaps.

xxx

this looks real grim.. place looks dead i love it

 

[dallahan]

No point in really uploading at all this week but im looking for feedback.

I tried using AE to give it a nice snow effect but i cannot save it as a gif for i don't know how to keep it at high ish quality.

Cba to upload a longer a video.

Saw the video and at the end of the video is a face that everyone makes when they get a poster unbeliveably fancy

 

[lemon]

[Made the photoshop edit - not the pose]

Spoiler: Original

Thought about it a bit, and tbf, while it's a really nice edit, it was made on the same old pose. I'll turn a blind eye to this one, but in the future, try to not reedit the poster that was submitted in the previous week. That goes to everyone

 

[MaXenzie]

Thought about it a bit, and tbf, while it's a really nice edit, it was made on the same old pose. I'll turn a blind eye to this one, but in the future, try to not reedit the poster that was submitted in the previous week. That goes to everyone

In that case, I'll enter for feedback. Also yes it is supposed to be boring and empty.

Spoiler: Un-Edited

@Danny @dee pixel @EveryoneWithAnOpinion give feedback please.

 

[Erkor]

the lighting is a bit bright, at least the background lighting

if you'd darken it a little and brighten the lamp's light marginally, give it some bounce with small, shadowless and low-intensity lights, you could make a great lighting effect