Completed [Competition] Art of The Week

[Heck]

The AK is fine. He's ready to aim it but having it still lowered.

Is that a way you can hold it?
My god that looks awkward and uncomfortable

 

[Dicknose]

How Carl is holding it

 

[steambored]

Max probably won already but some feedback would be grand

master analyzer enabled.

ak guy legs fucked, how do u stand like that with a heavy gun like ak, spine seems too back rather than slightly forward shoulders/chest or straight pose. ak too out instead of pressing against the shoulder, make it like the guy actually is applying pressure to hold it in place and is correctly holding and operating a fuckin firearm

pistol guy too awkward and stiff, points for lookin cinematic but 0 point for realism and coolness

 

[Gabby]

You give up yet.. Hah.. You bastard...
<:...What do you want from me?...:>​

 

[Heck]

Still managed to Fit some of this in ;)

Spoiler: Submission

 

[Bandit]

Still managed to Fit some of this in :wink:

Spoiler: Submission

Wee bit dark, cant see whats going on infront of them

 

[Heck]

Wee bit dark, cant see whats going on infront of them

Becuase it goes through 2 editing programs probably :p

 

[Heck]

-Sorry for Double Post-

Spoiler: Replacement

 

[Fly]

Guess i'll hop in too anyways...

Spoiler: Submission

 

[Deleted member 3818]

Becuase it goes through 2 editing programs probably :stuck_out_tongue:

looks more like you just need to add some more lighting in game

 

[Dicknose]

What I improved. Now camera angle is or is that good?

 

[Deleted member 3818]

What I improved. Now camera angle is or is that good?

i'd say you just need to add lighting its too dark

 

[MaXenzie]

What I improved. Now camera angle is or is that good?

i'd say you just need to add lighting its too dark

Even if it's night time you still need to add lighting.

 

[Dicknose]

Even if it's night time you still need to add lighting.

I did. here the original without photoshop

 

[MaXenzie]

I did. here the original without photoshop

There's still no distinct lighting.

Add moonlight, or an orange glow from the top of the ridge, anything.

 

[Dicknose]

There's still no distinct lighting.

Add moonlight, or an orange glow from the top of the ridge, anything.

okay dad

 

[Dicknose]

Is that good?

 

[Ond]

Is that good?

yes much better

 

[steambored]

Is that good?

if i was you, theres several options gor lighting. you could do lava lighting, makeit seem like the clone troopers are walking right at the edge of the lava to sneak past, from the other side could be a moon light, strong enough to give them a sort of a rimlight to make it seem like an alien olanet, it doesnt have to be white, be creative and experinent, from the front of the droids could also be either slight lava light or you could turn it to feel like a battle is happening, make some red lights on the droids to signify them firing or small dim blue lights to signify them being hit, this would also require editing.

inother words experiment, the lighting is bland for a night time

 

[Dicknose]

if i was you, theres several options gor lighting. you could do lava lighting, makeit seem like the clone troopers are walking right at the edge of the lava to sneak past, from the other side could be a moon light, strong enough to give them a sort of a rimlight to make it seem like an alien olanet, it doesnt have to be white, be creative and experinent, from the front of the droids could also be either slight lava light or you could turn it to feel like a battle is happening, make some red lights on the droids to signify them firing or small dim blue lights to signify them being hit, this would also require editing.

inother words experiment, the lighting is bland for a night time

Going to add, having them sneak past lava is going to make me repose them, but I am content on the posing for this scene. Secondly, it would ruin the whole idea of a sneaky pose if there was a battle going on.