Completed [Competition] Art of The Week

[Mickey Toast]

@Mizaye https://www.google.com/search?q=EST...1rzXAhVs74MKHdGWAboQ_AUICigB&biw=1920&bih=974

Thanks for the feedback

 

[zigbomb]

ya'll got potential, you just gotta grow it.

I think you looked at it incorrectly on the art part, I don't think he was trying to draw something photorealistic.

 

[Mickey Toast]

Ye what zigbomb said, though i appreciate the feedback.

I took inspiration from Darkest Dungeon, went for a pretty cartoonish style

 

[steambored]

@Mizaye https://www.google.com/search?q=EST...1rzXAhVs74MKHdGWAboQ_AUICigB&biw=1920&bih=974

Thanks for the feedback

now that's a funky sword.

i get it that you were trying to go for darkest dungeon-sorta cartoonish look, but honestly its a little bit too far off from looking cartoonish.

 

[Bandit]

 

[Trains]

is that just a screenshot from warthunder

 

[Dicknose]

tell me what I need to add

 

[steambored]

more bushes, more trees, maybe an animal or something, go creative.

 

[Trains]

tell me what I need to add

try cover up the out of place bright grey lumps in the background imo, im not an expert but it looks a bit weird

 

[zigbomb]

now that's a funky sword.

i get it that you were trying to go for darkest dungeon-sorta cartoonish look, but honestly its a little bit too far off from looking cartoonish.

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i want the other guy back who knew what he was talking about

 

[steambored]

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i want the other guy back who knew what he was talking about

the proportions are still way too off is what i meant, it doesn't look like a cartoon character and just disproportionate being.

Spoiler: semibig picture

For reference. You can see the proportions are normal like they should be, his arms don't magically thin weirdly at the elbow. Neither do his legs become thinner as they go down. However, his is disproportionate at the legs and arms, simple as that. Even a cartoony look has it's limits before it starts to look improper and odd.

Also, there's a much better feeling of depth and proper stance that doesn't look odd.

 

[zigbomb]

Also, there's a much better feeling of depth and proper stance that doesn't look odd.

anime girl with an ar

 

[RGB]

entry rescinded on account of being bad

 

[Suplex]

I'm Hasak :grinning: tell me what you guys think of it.

 

[Cavity]

 

[MaXenzie]

tell me what I need to add

right click

fix that ambient occlusion by upping depth of field to the max value

that'll remove the grains

add cool fog in the background

 

[Suplex]

"Behind enemy Lines" I know the hand is messed up, the model was skinny around the wrist, so I couldn't actually do anything with that.

 

[Deleted member 1392]

 

[constantdisplay]

conscripts got clean up duty

Spoiler: xd

 

[Anleus]

conscripts got clean up duty

Spoiler: xd

pretty dark? or is it my screen :scream: