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You should've zoomed in, the scene looks extremely empty. The gun would've looked much nicer if it was seen resting on his shoulder, giving his right arm something to do apart from grasping his pocket.
You should've zoomed in, the scene looks extremely empty. The gun would've looked much nicer if it was seen resting on his shoulder, giving his right arm something to do apart from grasping his pocket.
Something I do anyway is something I call "If you can't figure out how, don't do it." Just try to find alternatives.His right arm is actually, what atleast my intention was, that he was holding his suspender to keep the gun from falling/slipping off his back, but sadly I haven't found any way of making an actual sling. I'll post an updated version with a zoomed in perspective later, thanks for the feedback.
You screenshoted these out of their respective games, or in Gmod?Hey guys, decided to give this a whirl after my friend suggested it to me. I'd rather upload the ones I enjoy the most though, please give me feedback!
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I have more but i'd rather like to get feedback on these before I post anything worse.
@Dicknose, I take it that this is your final submission. Both here and in the previous pose your biggest problem was lighting, it feels really flat here, like you'd use only one lamp on each character and put it in front of them. Try to use more lights and put them on various angles towards the character in question, it will make shadows and feel just absolutely better. It has a neat concept though and both of the characters match correctly. Neato
@Heck, yeah, like you said, bloom is the problem here. That mattress is so fucking white, that I'd be surprised if it hasn't joined the KKK yet. Despite that though, everything else is just right, even though the walls are very bare. I'd just turn down the light, maybe even make it minimal so that this place would feel like a rathole it is. Pretty nice concept, would love to see it develop overtime
@Jer, something I'd see as a poster in a roleplay document. Not necessary a bad thing, but yeah, there is a lot to improve if you'd want it to be a wallpaper, even though it has it's style. If you were aiming for making this one look like a photo though, you did it quite well, as it feels very much like a real one. GG
@goose, take your
@liew, same as above,
@RGB,
@Supersoup, they're pretty much just screenshots with a little bit of editing, but I like where you're going. It has sort of a portrait look in it, and if you'd edit it with that in mind, it could look very decent. The only real problem here is how low resolution these models are, which I think you can guess how to fix. I honestly wish you best of luck with this kind of art, as portraits are one of the hardest formats to pull off with a decent result. I'd love to see more of your work though, keep them coming man
@zigbomb, pretty nice pose for just being a meme. I honestly like how dynamic it is, even if most of the animations here are ripped from HL2. Also, this here is a perfect example of a properly filled up pose, love it.
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