Completed [Competition] Art of The Week

[Dicknose]

going to photoshop this
[doublepost=1526325686][/doublepost]feedback is also welcomed

 

[Dicknose]

going to photoshop this
[doublepost=1526325686][/doublepost]feedback is also welcomed

Any feedback?

 

[CloudBucket]

Any feedback?

I like it. However I get this 2d aspect. It might just be me but I'd love to see more you know? Like what he is looking at and why did that firw start? Also some lighting where the fire is would add more depth if put in right. You are doing good, keep it up!

edit: look up phongboost for sfm tutorial and you can make the guy look wet due to the rain

 

[ddæ]

Any feedback?

very wide stance, in the movies luke is always exclusively seen with very rugged, tight and tall movements save for the backflip onto the barge in Episode VI. he towers upwards, and holds the lightsaber high as if he was in a combat defensive stance - looks better than what you went for imo - just looks unnatural with the particularly large spacing of his legs

 

[Dicknose]

very wide stance, in the movies luke is always exclusively seen with very rugged, tight and tall movements save for the backflip onto the barge in Episode VI. he towers upwards, and holds the lightsaber high as if he was in a combat defensive stance - looks better than what you went for imo - just looks unnatural with the particularly large spacing of his legs

I like it. However I get this 2d aspect. It might just be me but I'd love to see more you know? Like what he is looking at and why did that firw start? Also some lighting where the fire is would add more depth if put in right. You are doing good, keep it up!

edit: look up phongboost for sfm tutorial and you can make the guy look wet due to the rain

Okay will do both

 

[Dicknose]

Spoiler: update

Updated fellas

 

[Man wearing a helmet]

Spoiler: update

Updated fellas

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[Dicknose]

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Holy guacamole. If you could teach me how to do this shit, I'd be greatful

 

[Sixx]

vectors are the coolest shit on god's green earth

 

[aperson]

should I try and photoshop sparks onto the stunstick? also I think the lighting behind the cp in front is crap

 

[liew]

should I try and photoshop sparks onto the stunstick? also I think the lighting behind the cp in front is crap

grab a lamp of any colour n slap it behind the cop on the right, preferably hiding it by the cp on the left

would make for some pretty good rim lighting

 

[Lukemia]

Spoiler: update

Updated fellas

The green light source needs to be changed to the other side of lukes face, The source is on the opposite side of where lukes lightsaber actually is

 

[Dicknose]

The green light source needs to be changed to the other side of lukes face, The source is on the opposite side of where lukes lightsaber actually is

Good shit, missed that

 

[Zombine]

realized photography is acceptable here.
have an entry.

I wasn't sure which to pick, but I've taken quite a few recently.
here's a small selection of my recent photos.

 

[Charlie]

realized photography is acceptable here.
have an entry.

I wasn't sure which to pick, but I've taken quite a few recently.
here's a small selection of my recent photos.

That gallery is fucking glorious dude.

 

[aperson]

updated my entry, added a rimlight on the front cp and lit up the back cp

 

[Dicknose]

realized photography is acceptable here.
have an entry.

I wasn't sure which to pick, but I've taken quite a few recently.
here's a small selection of my recent photos.

Where were these taken?

 

[Zombine]

Where were these taken?

The one in the post is the Ghirardelli Square in San Francisco.
#1-4 are at the Monterey Bay Aquarium.
#5-11 are in Morro Bay, California
#12 Arizona, somewhere in a desert, I forgot
#13-14 Monterey, California
#15-20 My home town
#21-22 Colorado
#23 Monterey

 

[FieldersNL]

Started using advanced lighting and SDOF and I'm starting to get the hang of it

Here's a 2560x1080

 

[Vasey105]

Started using advanced lighting and SDOF and I'm starting to get the hang of it

Here's a 2560x1080

top one is way better, much better framing